2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
What I found important was to first of all make sure my videos are not on private to were everyone can access it. I also realized that I could shorten my pitch and get more to the point. This allows for people to get a clear understanding of what I am trying to sell to my customers. Having bogus information allows for people to get disinterested, question your work, and confuse what the actual product is.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
I actually made my video shorter. With more confidence I was able to speak quicker but also get all my information told. I was not able to get student feedback due to technical issues that have since been fixed.
Daryl,
ReplyDeleteI thought your pitch overall was pretty interesting. Like I mentioned on Johnathan's blog, I think the use of props would really help get the viewer's attention. My first two pitches were recorded in portrait mode like yours, my only suggestion (and this is thanks to Dr. Pryor) is to record in landscape mode. Apparently it looks better and seems more professional, although portrait videos never really bothered me.
Hi Daryl,
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, good job! I’m really glad you were able to get your upload situation figured out and get a working video up this week! I think my two biggest pieces of feedback are just about your actual physical presentation. Try to make sure you’re planting your feet when you present so you’re not swaying, it will create the perception that you’re extremely confident in your information. Also, just make sure your shoulders are boxed out once again just to create a power stance and solidify the presentation.
Hey Daryl,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your pitch, you seemed extremely professional and knowledge on your subject which is super important to an elevator pitch. I do agree with Deasja that being firm in your stance is a good idea mainly because, like she said, it conveys confidence to your audience. If you have a problem standing still, like I typically do, walking around confidently or taking a few steps to your right and left is a good replacement!